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Fic: Not All That Fantastic (Merlin, NC-17, Gen, Slash) 
3rd-Dec-2008 09:34 pm
Merlin - The Slash Dragon
Title: Not All That Fantastic
Author: [info]bakarini
Genre: Gen, Slash
Word Count: 1,161
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Merlin/Knight, Arthur watching
Summary: Arthur is left servantless at a feast, and sets to finding out exactly what Merlin thinks is more important than serving him.
In Which: Arthur finds out that he is not the center of the universe, and Merlin has a sex life.
Notes: Originally the beginning was written as a prompt for [info]clockworkwolves, and the first half by me and the second half by her can be found over here at Capslock_Merlin. But, I was having a little too much fun with it not to continue a version of my own...

Not All That Fantastic

Arthur never really thought Merlin was all that fantastic. A horrible manservant, big ears that might have been cute – but he was a prince and princes weren’t supposed to think anything was cute, gangly, and crossing the border into moronic.

He also never really minded that Merlin made it to the stocks at least twice a week, and didn’t care if the kid was run ragged doing chores for the boatload of other knights who ordered him around on the training field and in the armory.

And then, in the middle of the night, servantless and forced to make his own drunken way from some feast or another, he’d been distracted from his hunt for manservant and/or bed, by noises just around the corner – the armory, of all places. And God damned if Merlin abandoned him to go clean swords in the middle of the night. He was supposed to be serving Arthur wine and food and guiding his inebriated ass to bed.

Cracking the door open with every intent of scaring the living shit out of his manservant, Arthur was keen on finding out exactly what Merlin thought was more important than serving the prince and standing around waiting on the borders of the feast.

Apparently, Merlin found it more important to have his back ground up against a wall, pale legs folded around the waist of a tall, dark, half naked knight who’s thick fingers gripped those bony hips tight enough to leave bruises.

Those little grunts weren’t from exertion. Well… not exertion from cleaning Arthur’s armor, at least.

He was going to leave, really, duck out and leave them be – because, come on, they were screwing and that was a rather private thing.

Then again, Merlin was his manservant, and they were fucking in the amory, of all places. It wasn’t like they locked the door, or went into an actual room. They were just there, in the open, practically asking to be walked in on.

Merlin let out a strangled sound, dragging out of his throat between panting gasps of breath, something that was deep and husky and slid out of his long, extended neck, head leaning against the wall, hair getting more unruly by the second as each hard thrust of the man holding him by the hips drove him up the wall. Up and down, up and down.

Arthur shook his head, once, hard. There was something prowling in his chest, something hot and angry, something that he couldn’t quite place and didn’t make sense.

The heat pooling down in his groin, on the other hand – that made perfect sense. It was also the reason why he needed to leave. Now.

He was shutting the door, he would always swear he was shutting the door, when another sound broke out and he froze. His heart pounding roughly in his chest. Merlin had leaned his head back farther, if it was even possible, his back arching so his chest pressed against the other man’s, his long, pale fingers tensing and digging into the man’s bare, tanned shoulders. Oh god.

He would insist he was still shutting the door, even though his eyes had yet to leave Merlin.

Merlin whose breath was coming hitched gasps, whose body was tense and shuddering, whose neck was flushed pink, crawled up to his ears and spilling down his chest and under his shirt. Merlin, whose eyes were closed, pink, swollen lips parted in pleasure. Merlin, who ripped a hand from the man’s shoulder and grabbed him roughly by the hair, who didn’t look down but ground out a rough, husky, “harder.”

Arthur’s hands weren’t anywhere near his crotch. One on the doorknob, the other pressed against the wall, holding him up. But the sound of Merlin’s voice, like that – He came, hard and fast, making his knees shudder under him, his fingers tightening on the doorknob and his hand sliding roughly along the wall as he worked to keep himself upright.

He was still hard. Great for a long go of pleasing the latest woman to fall in the young Pendragon’s sheets. Not so great for voyeuristically spying on a manservant fucking a knight in the armory – an armory very not close to his room.

The knight leaned in, so close to pressing his face to Merlin’s neck, inches from landing lips on Merlin’s skin. And then stopped, head pulled back roughly by Merlin’s fingers, still wrapped in his hair. Both of them, so close. Merlin’s cock arching up and pressing against his stomach, slick with pre-come and completely ignored.

Merlin’s legs tightened around the man in front of him, and he was so tense, as though he could snap in half at any moment, shuddering so hard Arthur was shocked the castle wasn’t falling down around them. “Harder.” His voice was thick with lust, passion, and hard with demand.

The knight grunted compliance, fingers digging into Merlin’s hips, and thrusting roughly into him, slamming Arthur’s manservant against the wall, thrusting him up it, making Merlin groan with something that sounded like pleasure even as his lips twitched with what was no doubt pain – but he wasn’t complaining.

Fingers still in the man’s hair, so tight, he had to be ripping it out, the knight leaned forward, pressing into Merlin’s neck. Biting, kissing, licking – God, Arthur couldn’t see, but he could hear well enough. Just a whisper of a word, rough and low. “Merlin.”

He should have been paying attention to whose voice it was – instead he was staring, transfixed, as Merlin let out a choked off groan of breath and came, hot and hard over their stomachs, wrapping himself even tighter around the man holding him. Arthur came with him. A second time, unaided except for the sight and sound of Merlin.

The knight thrust roughly into Merlin once, twice more, and came with a gasping breath and grunt that was buried in Merlin’s neck.

They clung to each other, panting and sweating, Merlin’s fingers sliding from the man’s hair as the knight turned his head to claim a kiss. Deep and heavy, a kiss that made Merlin make noises in the back of his throat, and made the thing that was hot and angry rear in Arthur’s chest dangerously.

He left then, because he couldn’t stay. Couldn’t stay because they’d see him, and because the thing in his chest was angry and demanded attention that he refused to give to it.

He stumbled back to his quarters, spent and not so drunk, alone.

He went to bed reminding himself that Merlin was not all that fantastic. That he was still a horrible manservant, that his ears were too big and not cute, that he was gangly, and definitely moronic. But every time he blinked, he saw Merlin, glistening with sweat and huskily demanding things that were perverse and twisted, that made him tense and come and gleam with sex, and the hot thing in his chest rumbled lowly.


:: NEXT :: Maybe A Little Fantastic, But That Was It
Comments 
4th-Dec-2008 06:13 am (UTC)
OH HOLY FUCK. *PASSES OUT*
4th-Dec-2008 06:34 am (UTC)
Heeeeee! ♥
4th-Dec-2008 06:16 am (UTC)
This was extremely, extremely hot. Exactly what I was looking for :D
4th-Dec-2008 06:35 am (UTC)
Why thank you! ♥ My first Merlin fic, and my first porny fic in quite awhile, so very happy that you liked it. :D
4th-Dec-2008 06:24 am (UTC)
Oh God, I'm not even in this fandom but this was still so damn HOT.

*runs off to watch Merlin*
4th-Dec-2008 06:36 am (UTC)
You need to watch this show SO BADLY!!! SO BADLY! OMG AL:JF:LDKJ

WATCH IT!

Because it is awesome.

And because, no doubt, I will be writing more porn for it. XD

(really happy you liked it, I was actually nervous, there are a lot of great writers in this fandom, and they make me all sweaty and anxious about my own lame writing)
4th-Dec-2008 06:43 am (UTC)
JGSRIGHSLDSMKFDLSMKGJKDSHJGRUSPOKDFJHNDSBVFDHKJGHSDLKJF!!!!

OH MY FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!

*is brain dead*

(sequel????)
4th-Dec-2008 06:46 am (UTC)
If it turns out right, it'll be a mini series of Arthur developing full blow jealousy and possessiveness. Because I am in love with that idea.

Not sure how fast I'm going to write them, or in what order. But that's what I'd love to do. XD
4th-Dec-2008 07:26 am (UTC)
Oh, my voyeurism kink. How do I always forget I have you?? *drools all over your fic* HOTHOTHOTHOTHOT. DAYUM. ♥_♥
4th-Dec-2008 07:27 am (UTC)
Heeee! Why thank you muchly. ♥ *hands over fan*
4th-Dec-2008 08:15 am (UTC)
Nnnnnnnnnnnnnngh. That was the hottest sex scene I've read in the fandom. Seriously. God almighty. *fans self* I think I need a cold shower.
4th-Dec-2008 08:27 am (UTC)
That... Wow. *blush* Thank you! Way to boost a writer's ego. :D Not to mention I was deathly nervous about writing anything for this fandom because there are so many fantastic Arthur/Merlin slash writers out there.

Thank you! ♥
4th-Dec-2008 08:17 am (UTC)
Mwah. Guh. This, you, love. Yes. LOVE.

*ded from blood loss, coherent comment later*
4th-Dec-2008 08:28 am (UTC)
Oh noez!!

*revives*

I want my coherent comment!! XD haha - So glad I was able to please. ♥
4th-Dec-2008 08:30 am (UTC)
ha, excellent...
4th-Dec-2008 08:32 am (UTC)
:D Thank you!
4th-Dec-2008 10:27 am (UTC)
Wonderful, hot, tense, brilliant writing. ♥

I'm friending you, do you mind?
4th-Dec-2008 04:40 pm (UTC)
Heeee. Thank you!

And, I do not mind what so ever! ♥ Friend ahoy!!
4th-Dec-2008 11:06 am (UTC)
I read it here, not because I have a problem reading a whole fic in capslock... but because I may have overdosed on the caps today. Maybe. Just a bit. But anyway, hiya! A comment from me, not in caps! How novel. :)

This is - phwoar, OMG - pretty damn smokin' hot. I love the tension in it and the descriptions of the thing in Arthur's chest - the way he doesn't quite recognise it or want to examine it, but at the same time can't ignore it. Very nice. Well done. :D
4th-Dec-2008 04:46 pm (UTC)
OMG A COMMENT NOT IN ALL CAPS?! *dies*

Look, I can do non-caps too! And talking about overdosing on caps... Yeeaaahhh. I think the amount of caps I was typing yesterday was making me, like, insane. All giddy and giggle and, well, utterly nonsensical and insane.

Thank you for the comment! *loves*
4th-Dec-2008 11:16 am (UTC)
Oh my goodness. Merlin. Having sex. Against the armoury wall. *G*
I adore the thought of Merlin as a pushy bottom. And Arthur being in denial and then oh gosh the ending and guhhhh. *blabbles*

I loved it, all of it. :3

-x-
4th-Dec-2008 04:48 pm (UTC)
Heeeeee!!! I wasn't even planning on pushybottom!Merlin, it just kind of happened because is so desperately needed to! And now I think I'm in a little love with it.

Happy to be of service! Glad you enjoyed it. ♥
4th-Dec-2008 11:50 am (UTC)
oh man *loves all over this*
4th-Dec-2008 04:48 pm (UTC)
*loves you back*
4th-Dec-2008 11:56 am (UTC)
WOW, I'd love to see what happens the next morning!

I think there might be a typo should "He came, hard a fast," read "He came, hard and fast"?
4th-Dec-2008 05:04 pm (UTC)
Well, with luck there will be more of the Merlin has a sex life and Arthur proceeds to get continuously jealous. ♥

Ah, you are right!! Typo fixed. :D Thank you.
4th-Dec-2008 12:05 pm (UTC)
Guh.

*brains leaks out of ears*

Hot! *fans cheeks* Seriously, I've lost brain cells.

And AngryJealous!Arthur FTW!
4th-Dec-2008 05:05 pm (UTC)
*rushes to put your brains back in your head*

AngryJealous!Arthur FTW for sure!
4th-Dec-2008 01:53 pm (UTC)
Jesus Christ, I shouldn't have decided to read this just before I was about to go out. I'm going to be distracted and useless now! So veeeeeeeery hot!
4th-Dec-2008 05:06 pm (UTC)
WOOOO for making people distracted and useless!

Thank you muchly! ♥
4th-Dec-2008 02:51 pm (UTC)
Bloody hell...

Sorry, my brain appears to be scrambled.

Comment? Uh, I'm still imagining Merlin saying 'harder' in that rough, husky voice and the effect that it has on Arthur.

Well, if you will write roughwall!sex... in the armoury... what do you expect?! ;)

Very hot, and I am really hoping that the series happens, really can't get enough of jealous-driven-to-distraction-by-Merlin!Arthur.
4th-Dec-2008 05:07 pm (UTC)
Oh, the more I think about doing a series and all the delicious places Merlin can have a sex life - oh yes, it will be written! ♥ Heeee!
4th-Dec-2008 03:20 pm (UTC)
*blink* Did you just give Arthur a chest monster? <3
4th-Dec-2008 05:08 pm (UTC)
A CHEST MONSTER OF CRAZY JEALOUSY!!! Yes. XD
4th-Dec-2008 04:19 pm (UTC)
Ooohhh... Thank you so very much for the utter hotness!
4th-Dec-2008 05:08 pm (UTC)
You're welcome. :D
4th-Dec-2008 04:54 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. God.

HAWT.

If you're going to be friends-locking your fic, mind friending me? 'cause damn, I'm going to be hunting down everything else you've written! :)
4th-Dec-2008 05:10 pm (UTC)
hahahaha Sure.

You are now my friend!!

(I just friend lock the NC-17 stuff. I like to know whose reading it really... XD Because it is porny and delicious and I am nosy and need to know these things. ♥)
4th-Dec-2008 06:18 pm (UTC)
*melts into puddle of happy mush*
Oh my O_O

Arthur should've gone in there and claimed his Merlin!!!

I love it
*squeee*

4th-Dec-2008 06:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ♥

Yes, well, I did have a rather harsh debate over whether Arthur would just burst in there or not - but since Merlin and anonymous!knight were literally in the middle of sexing it up... *snicker* I just... Besides, we got to see pushybottom!Merlin.

And we will get to see jealous!Arthur wracked with jealousy as time goes on... XD
4th-Dec-2008 06:59 pm (UTC)
That was so effing hot!!!! Unlike the title, this was incredibly fantastic!
4th-Dec-2008 07:00 pm (UTC)
:D Thank you! ♥
4th-Dec-2008 09:22 pm (UTC)
HAWT! \o/

And I don't read HP, but I thought of the chest monster too. XD
4th-Dec-2008 09:29 pm (UTC)
Thank you! So happy you liked! ♥
4th-Dec-2008 10:09 pm (UTC)
Sex in the armoury - what an image! Hot men, weapons, sex and jealous!Arthur - what's not to like?
4th-Dec-2008 10:11 pm (UTC)
Thank you! ♥
4th-Dec-2008 10:31 pm (UTC)
This was hot. Really, really hot! And with voyeurism, wall!sex and Arthur coming all over himself? Nguh.

(Not to mention that your writing is absolutely lovely to read. ♥)
4th-Dec-2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
Heeee! Thank you so much! ♥ Really, comments make me smile and be happy and want to write more. :D
4th-Dec-2008 10:53 pm (UTC)
Guh? *iz dead*

Revived long enough to say, 'thank you'.
4th-Dec-2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
Opps! Don' die for long!! You'll miss future porniness!!!!
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